Monday, February 6, 2012

editorial


   Dylan Shaughnessy
1/31/12
Humanities
Editorial                                    Stop killing, and Stop the Great Wall



Wall should be stopped and should have never been built.  The Great Wall is like a punishment.  Once you work there you never come back.  Thousands of people are working on it.  Some people want to have it but others don’t. A lot of people are dieing each day and there is nothing we can do to stop it.  Also, Families are getting ripped apart and losing the people they love.  The families don’t even know if they are alive when the men work on the Great Wall.  Second of all Their are harsh conditions and bad weather.  When there is harsh conditions and bad weather it mean shorter life when hard labor.  The building of the Great wall is very deadly.  There fore we should not continue building the Great Wall.

           Some people also disagree.  People could say that they diserve to die.  Because they slack on their work.  Maybe that’s the way people live.  “An eye for an eye.”   While others might say that it will boost our protection and people want that don’t they?  The people who want the great wall to progress are the wrong thing to do.

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